Sunday 31 March 2013

Hellrunner... or Bladeboy

For my comics class we had  the choice of three scripts to do a scene from either The Big Lebowski,  Blade-runner or Empire Strikes Back. I chose Bladerunner.
So here is the scene where Leon and Roy visit Chew in his eye laboratory done in as close as I could get to Mike Mignola.

1st- Finished pages
2nd- Ink/Line work
3rd- Rough page layout
4th- Script break down















 SPLASH PAGE

EXT. STREET - NIGHT

A blimp is drifting silently over the city reflected
in an eyeball while we hear the SOUNDS OF THE
STREET.

PAGE 1


The eyeball belongs to BATTY who is standing on
the sidewalk. He resembles a tradition, the gym
instructor, short, cropped hair with the body of a
drill sergeant but the eyes are gray and chilling.
Roy Batty is a presence of force with a lazy, but
acute sense of what goes on around him.

He lowers his attention from the sky to Leon.
Leon approaches him.

BATTY
Did you get your precious photos?

LEON
Somebody was there.

BATTY
Police.

LEON
Just men.

BATTY
Police men.

Leon looks sullen. He doesn't know.

Batty is looking at the storefront across the street,
the one that says HANNIBAL CHEW over the door.

Batty indicates the store to Leon with a head movement.

CUT TO

PAGE 2

INT. CHEW'S SHOP – NIGHT

2.1-Eyes. Nothing but eyes swimming in a thick, clear
solution.

2.2-The eyes are in an aquarium inside Chew's shop.
There are other aquariums and technical equipment.
CHEW himself, wearing a heavy fur coat and gloves is
hunched over a workbench in a pool of light doing
meticulous work with a pair of forceps.

2.3- He is an ancient Asian and his steamy breath and frosty beard
indicate just how cold it is in this sub-zero
laboratory.

2.4- Chew dips the forceps into a vat at his side.
Deep cold!
The forceps and the tiny item in the forceps come out
of the solution frozen solid.

2.5- A SPEAKER on the wall CRACKLES and FARTS STATIC.
WALL SPEAKER
Mr. Chew.

2.6- Chew keeps working.

CHEW
Aaaaaaaannnnn?

- The wall speaker is intermittent.

WALL SPEAKER
... one... URP... wants... to
see you.
Chew continues working.

2.8- CHEW
Busy!

WALL SPEAKER
... talk to you... Nexus Six...
designs.

2.9- Chew frowns and turns from his work disgruntled.

CHEW
Busy!

PAGE 3

3.1- Chew continues working while he mutters in Chinese.
Peace returns, he calms down and works in chilly
silence.

3.2- Then the door opens.
Standing in the doorway is Roy Batty.
Chew gets up fuming.

CHEW
Busy! Busy! You go away! Make
appointment.

Chew bursts into Chinese.

3.3- Batty smiles. You would not want him to smile at you.

Leon enters and closes the door.

CHEW
(apoplectic)
No! No! Cold! Cold! Go away.

3.4- Batty smiles. His coat is already covered with ice.

BATTY
Questions.

CHEW
No! No questions!

3.5- Leon is staring at the floating eyes in an aquarium.
Batty smiles pleasantly and glances at a tank of
deep cold.

3.6- Batty sticks his hand in.

CHEW
(urgently)
No! Cold!

3.7- Batty still smioing, pulls his hand out. It's icy.
Chew looks at Batty's hand and then at his smiling face.

3.8- Chew screams in sudden discovery and outrage.

CHEW
You replicant!


PAGE 4

4.1- We looks at Batty's machine-gun smile, steam pouring
from his nostrils as we hear the shrill, indignant
voice of Chew being outraged.

CHEW'S VOICE (OS)
You illegal. Can't come here!
Illegal.

4.2- Batty is smiling his smokey smile and Chew is pointing
up.

CHEW
You not belong here. Up there!

4.3- BATTY
Fiery the Angels fell... And as they
fell deep thunder rolled around their
shores;
indignant,
burning with the fires of Orc.

4.4- Chew is bug eyed. What is this shit?
Batty reaches out and puts his hands on the collar of
Chews's fur coat.

BATTY
Questions!

4.5- RRRRRIIIIIIPPPP.Batty pulls the coat apart,

PAGE 5

5.1-Chew is suddenly totally scared, totally cold and totally
co-operative.

CHEW
Okay! Answers!
(pointing)
Gimmeee coat! Cold!

5.2- Chew is pointing to the wall pegs where more fur coats
hang.

BATTY
Morphology.. longevity... use life...
incept dates...

5.3- CHEW
(squealing)
I dunno! Dunna that stuff. I do
eyes! Just eyes! Genetic designs,
just eyes!

5.4/5.5/5.6/5.7/5.8- Batty looks around the room at the tank of eyes, the
muscle charts of eyes, the pictures of eyes.

BATTY
Ah! I thought perhaps feet...
hands... muscle tissue.. or..
noses...

5.9- CHEW
(desperate)
Just eyes. Gimee coat, okay?

5.10- Leon is staring into the tank of eyes, trying not to
blink.
The eyes stare back at Leon, unblinkingly, arrogantly.

5.11- BATTY
My eyes..... I guess you designed
them, eh?

5.12- CHEW
You Nexus? I design Nexus eyes.

PAGE 6

6.1/6.2-SMASH! Leon, infuriated by the unblinking eyes, smashes
the tank. the insolent eyes pour out onto the floor.

6.3-Batty smiles and points to his own eyes.


BATTY
Ah, Chew.....

6.5- (squish,squish) The squishes are Batty's feet
stepping in eyeballs as he paces in front of Chew.

6.6- If only you could see the things
I have seen with your eyes.

CHEW
Please! Cc-cc-cold!

6.7- BATTY
(prosecuting attorney)
Questions!

CHEW
D-dunno answers! P-please!

6.8- BATTY
Who does?

PAGE 7

7.1CHEW
Tyro! Knows everything!

BATTY
The Tyrell Corporation?

CHEW
Big boss! Big genius! Design
your brain.

7.2- BATTY
Ah! Smart!

CHEW
V-very cold, p-please....

BATTY
Not an easy man to see, I'd
guess. Security.....

7.3 CHEW
Sebastian take you! Gimmee
coat.

BATTY
And who is Sebastian?

7.4- Chew is blue and hysterical.

- CHEW
J-j-j-j-j F. S-sebastian.
Please.............

- BATTY
Ah! How would I find him...
J.F. Sebastian ?

7.7/ 7.8/ 7.9Chew looks like heart attack city. Is it going to
go on forever?












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